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【原创】* 桃源忆故人·陋室青衣叹

2013-10-30 20:51:24| 分类：戎情放怀 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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揣度世间秋江黯，苇慢潇潇天涧。

雁字横排霄汉，长月剜心颤。

苦酸过往经年观，仗剑天涯遗憾。

风冷墨池残卷，陋室青衣叹。

------------- 格律检测 ---------------
揣度世间秋江黯【黯：八寒】押韵
苇慢潇潇天涧【涧：八寒】押韵
雁字横排霄汉【汉：八寒】押韵
长月剜心颤【断：八寒】押韵
苦酸过往经年观【观：八寒(平)，八寒(仄)】押韵
仗剑天涯遗憾【憾：八寒】押韵
风冷墨池残卷【卷：八寒】押韵
陋室青衣叹【叹：八寒】押韵
------------ 检测结果 (中华新韵) ------------
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